Ultimate Nothingness

Question

Select one potent metaphor from the opening poem (e.g., "a string is snapped") and one from "A Confession" (e.g., "Life in you Retained its touch of Eden dew"). Explain the literal image each creates and the deeper emotional or philosophical concept it conveys, as if simplifying it for someone new to poetry.

Synthesized answer

From the opening poem, a potent metaphor is "arrow-like through all the city's roll, The sense of that sweet silence touched my soul, And cleaving through the barrier of years Entered the very citadel of tears" [2]. This creates the literal image of an arrow piercing through the noise and movement of a city and then penetrating deeply into a person's inner emotional core, specifically reaching the "citadel of tears." Philosophically, it conveys how a profound sense of peace or silence can have an immediate and powerful impact, bypassing external distractions and directly affecting deep-seated emotions and past sorrows.

From "A Confession," the metaphor "Life in you Retained its touch of Eden dew" [1] presents a literal image of life possessing a fresh, pure, and pristine quality, like the dew found in the Garden of Eden. Emotionally and philosophically, this suggests that the person being addressed held an innate purity and innocence. This quality provided a source of spiritual nourishment and renewal for the speaker, especially during difficult times, acting as a constant reminder of what is good and untainted in the world.

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From the book

← The Draught of Life Poems by Agnes Louisa Storrie A Confession I'll Explain → 4516514 Poems — A Confession Agnes Louisa Storrie ​ A Confession. You did not know, how could you, dear, How much you stood for? Life in you Retained its touch of Eden dew, And ever, through the droughtiest year, My soul could bring her flagon here And fill it to the brim with clear Deep draughts of purity. And time could never quench the flame Of youth, that lit me through your eyes, And cozened winter from my skies Through all the years that went and came. You did not know I used your name To conjure by, and…
Passage [4]
d Uttered from far by an apostle bird, There were the only hints of life, and they Fitted the muted music of the day. 0! arrow-like through all the city's roll, The sense of that sweet silence touched my soul, And cleaving through the barrier of years Entered the very citadel of tears. There was the grove of wattles. Gold on gold, The perfect moment whose unmatchable mould Breaks then for ever. Sound, and sense, and sight Illumined by a tense and inward light. ​ The tide full-flood, kisses attainment's lips For just one moment ere it sees eclipse, And life has just one harvest of an hour When…
Passage [177]
ind Where my life and its hopes were planted A universe, stored with the glamour poured From a blood-red rose enchanted. ​ And here in a shadowy alley where no alien footsteps tread Like cool green moss on my bruised heart grow my memories of the dead, Softer than farewell kisses, cooler than twilight's shade They cover, with tender verdure the scars that death hath made, Mosses and golden lichen, like sweet thoughts together pressed, Each delicate tuft a remembrance flowering among the rest, Thoughts that I dare not face elsewhere smile at me in the gloom, And from seeds of bitter pain there…
Passage [130]
like a blossom, into sudden bloom, A prophet's instinct, that 'mid chaos knew How suns would kiss a future drop of dew. A need of light, which, focussed in the dark, Lit by suggestion this miraculous spark, Within whose matrix of strange fibres spun Is stored the secret essence of the sun. Was it some tincture ignorantly spilled Into earth's crucible? or did a skilled Alchemist pity on the fused mass take And, smiling, add it for its beauty's sake? Mysterious as the spiritual flowers that flame Through human souls and passionately claim Kinship with beauty, incoherent as the gleams Of…
Passage [66]
the dewy night And I sought some sweet, wild thing— Some wayside blossom, frail and bright, That could not hold a sting. And mine eyes were dim, for my tears fell fast, But I gathered a fair field-flower at last, And my heart within was hot As I trembling drew to the lighted room, A ghost looked out from the turquoise bloom— I had plucked a forget-me-not!
Passage [140]

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