No longer than a breath

Question

Analyze the maid Dora's report of Miss Hale's phone calls, especially the "particular message" to call back. Why is this information presented so early and with such emphasis? Explain how these seemingly minor details could act as the immediate spark for the "breath of scandal" alluded to in the title.

Synthesized answer

Dora, the maid, reports that Miss Hale telephoned for Mr. Mowbry from Evanston around five o'clock, leaving her name and a message for him. Later, approximately ten minutes before Dora speaks to Gregg, a young lady, who Dora believes is Miss Hale again, calls. This second call is emphasized by Dora stating, "Oh, yes, sir, a particular one," when asked if there was a message [2].

The early and emphatic presentation of these phone calls, especially the "particular message," could serve as an immediate spark for a "breath of scandal." The fact that Miss Hale calls twice from Evanston, and that the second call has a "particular message" that Gregg Mowbry specifically inquires about, suggests a matter of urgency or significance. This early focus on communication from Miss Hale to Gregg, combined with the later revelation of Mr. Hale's affair with Mrs. Russell [5] and Marjorie's plan to write to her mother [3], hints at a potential connection that could lead to public gossip or scandal. The passages do not explicitly state what the "particular message" was, nor do they directly link these calls to the "breath of scandal" beyond setting the stage for later revelations.

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the cowardice of it filled her with loathing. She crumpled tight the envelope and enclosure and burned both immediately. Going out to a public booth where she might not be overheard, she telephoned Felix Rinderfeld, who approved her action and expressed the belief that nothing more dangerous was likely to follow from that anonymous source. However, he added that he was very glad to talk with her for he had been about to send her word that one of the events which he had been anticipating was soon to happen; affairs were so working out that Mr. Stanway was to be expected to call in person to…
Passage [42]
← Front matter The Breath of Scandal by Edwin Balmer Chapter 1 Chapter 2 → 3659909 The Breath of Scandal — Chapter 1 Edwin Balmer ​ THE BREATH OF SCANDAL CHAPTER I G REGG MOWBRY, who had come home with nothing unusual on his mind, flung his new brown overcoat on a hook in the hall closet, tossed his hat after it, and was cheerfully whistling on his way to his room when the maid appeared from the rear hall and spoke to him shyly. "Why, good evening," he replied in his pleasant way, halting. "Mr. Whittaker home yet?" "No, sir; but he should be soon. He wanted early dinner to-night." "Mail or…
Passage [4]
that he had known of Marjorie's plan and approved of it, but that his wife, being more formal minded, would not approve. He repeated, what he found to be the fact, that Marjorie was writing her mother as though she were at home; and he suggested that his wife's friends refrain from disturbing Mrs. Hale by mentioning in letters that Marjorie actually was not at home. As a matter of fact, Corinna Hale had few friends with whom she kept up any sort of correspondence; and none of these cared to intrude openly upon her personal affairs. Something was wrong in the Hale family, people began to…
Passage [242]
as in the mail which was delivered at the Hale's door in Evanston about ten o'clock that morning. Before this hour, Mrs. Hale had gone out as she always made an early start of her day, particularly since now she had added a visit to the hospital to her routine; her letters therefore were placed on a stand in the hall and Marjorie, passing by, noticed an envelope addressed to her mother in peculiar characters evidently formed by an adult but printed by a pen. There was no clue to the sender other than the postmark of Chicago, but it was such an unusual looking letter to come to that house that…
Passage [41]
ed during the evening and left his name. This was mere routine, for Billy telephoned for news of Marjorie every evening. It annoyed Hale, particularly when he happened to answer the telephone when ​ Billy was calling; but Whittaker's extreme attitude did not disturb Hale as much as Gregg's slight change of manner with him; for he knew that Billy condemned him wholesale for his affair with Mrs. Russell, and Billy scarcely could feel added abomination of him because he had hurt his daughter, but Gregg's different attitude was because of Marjorie. Hale did not mind meeting Billy on the street or…
Passage [256]

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